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attention!
once again my flippent mind has recreated my story , after days of ripping apart my story ive realised what it was that hages was trying to say to me about my animation, he was asking where the story was going, there wasnt surprise in anything , you knew exactly how it was going to end as soon as it started..... and it didnt really have much flare......................
i was there with the impression that my visual would be able to get me through, but i realised , that you cant even begin to play out your story in your animation if there is no real body to it. And until this morning i was at wits end , for i had reached a point in my storyboard where i couldnt fill the gap of story line , basically basing the whole story on 1 thing.
so here it is
my new story board
ok now let me tell it in english
-2 boys sit it a sand pit , each with thier favourite toy.....
-scott has come to visit timmy and scott has brought along his new toy robot, while timmy has his all time favourite bunny
-during the animation scott is bagging out timmy because he believes that his bunny is stupid and for girls and babies
-scott decides that this bunny no longer should be around and sets out to feed it to the dog
-the boys struggle with the bunny , and result in the bunnies ear being torn off completely
-timmy runs inside crying to tell his mum wat scott has done
-he tells his mum and she looks out the kitchen window to see what scott was doing , when hse finds he is no longer there
-the camera then cuts to the side of the tree that is out of view and scott has been beaten up cuts and bruises and his now suspended upside down in the tree and the bunny which he had torn from timmy is rested against the tree.
- the camera then zooms into the face of the toy , and the bunnys face slowly turns to an evil smile and an eerie quite chuckle.....
-screen goes black.
the end
what do ya reckon